Sunday, January 20, 2013

Cristian Rosero




the treason

There once was a man named Eric, he had a regular job in an office, a secretary, his life was normal and boring for him, one day his best friend went to visit him with his girlfriend who called Lucia, she was a very attractive woman, he had been struck with her.
Lucia also felt an attraction to him that afternoon Eric was invited to a dinner at the home of his friend. At dinner Eric could not stop seeing Lucia, Lucia also could not stop seeing Eric, to end the night finally Lucia and Eric could be alone, without anyone seeing, neither said anything just joined and kissed. and from that moment began a forbidden romance.
The days passed and the romance between them grew and grew, one day Lucia's boyfriend decided to make a trip to a beautiful lake, but also lucia had an idea of inviting Eric to the travel, Lucia's boyfriend accept that day went home Eric, spent some quality time and before going Lucia told her boyfriend "do not forget to invite your friend that wanted to make".


two weeks after the trip began, the holiday was a great idea but suddenly Lucia's boyfriend disappear,  anybody knows why, but he didn´t come again. Lucia and Eric returns to the hotel and they realize that many of their roommates friends were killed, they don´t know why they were killed. They were shocked and also very scared about this terrorific scene; later they went to the police station, and they told them about the terrorific scene in the hotel room, one police went to see, this police was Christopher he was a lieutenant of the army of the city.

The next day Christopher went to the morgue for analysis, but all the body disappear and Lucia and Eric didn´t know why; they were very scared and they wanted to scape of the beach, but they couldn´t because their car disappear from nowhere and their wallets too. They were stuck in that place alone, they run to the police station to see who can help them, but what they found was Christopher's partner died, and Christopher's burying the body of his partner.

Christopher saw Eric and Lucia outside of the cemetery where he was burying his friend, then he chased Lucia and Eric, and they run away, they return to the police station and the boy find a gun, when the police arrived, he aimed to his heart and shoot, and he kills Christopher, after he killed the police, Lucia's boyfriend appeared and asked the gun to his friend then he smiled and laughed a lot, and they didn´t know why, then he said that “Christopher was only an excuse for my killings, the criminal master mind was me” and smiled again. they so very confused, all the trip was only an excuse to kill all people that was his friends, they didn´t why, then the boy said now is your turn, because in the end my last victims will be my best friend and my girlfriend traitor, Lucia's boyfriend used the gun and the murderer; The boy smiled and laughed again, and he escaped with the car, he was the one who hide the car, and after he drive to another city to find their next victims. 



3 comments:

  1. That's what could happened when people couldn't talk and express their real feelings.
    A true friend will never lie to you and a true love will never cheat on you, because if you have true feelings you express it with actions not with words, by the way i think this man was crazy because kill all that people just for a girl is like psychiatric, all the ways it was and interesting drama short story. :)

    Alexandra.

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  2. Is an interesting story, but lacking a little in the end, I think a denouement a little more specific.

    PraP

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  3. You like the bloody scenes .... but very interesting ... I remain a doubt all die in the end?
    In your story you realize the things happened in a love relationship!

    Katty =)

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